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Moon Arica's avatar

The story got me hooked till the end and it all came together to give a great laugh! Michael you are so talented!

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Michael Serrur's avatar

You're the best. Thank you for the kind words!

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Nikolas Allen's avatar

A match made in heaven!

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Jason Duck's avatar

Good ending. Thought he was going to wake up in the morning with her being old again- a metaphor for those that wake up to someone they met the night before and look completely different once the booze and make up has worn off. But this ending works too 👍

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Michael Serrur's avatar

Thanks, @Jason Duck. Yeah, it’s always tricky deciding on an ending. You can take a story in so many different directions. I’ve certainly ruined a few by making the wrong choice.

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Donovan Sanders's avatar

Ha! Golden!

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Michael Serrur's avatar

I thought you might like this one lol

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