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Chris Lipson's avatar

Oh my goodness. Didn’t see that coming. Your descriptions place the reader right in the room! Really terrific!

Thanks for a great read.

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Michael Serrur's avatar

Thanks, Chris!

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Taru Marcellus's avatar

Your endings 😶 that was ruthless!

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Michael Serrur's avatar

Hahaha thanks…I don’t know how to write a happy ending!

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Ricardo Alberto's avatar

Really good, Michael. 🙌🏼

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Michael Serrur's avatar

Thanks brotha 🙏

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Ricardo Alberto's avatar

You gonna write anything Christmasy?

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Jason Duck's avatar

Great story 👏

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