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Cory's avatar

What a twist! Who is "Jack"!!!!?

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Alan Epstein's avatar

Michael… looks like your readers lured you into writing suspenseful series. Is it going to be a miniseries or maxiseries? I’m on the edge of my seat.😬 keep it coming! Thanks for the excitement!

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Michael Serrur's avatar

Trying to keep you all guessing! I have an astute readership so it’s not always easy keeping the twists fresh and unpredictable. Thanks for the support !

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Howie Lipson's avatar

Fantastic part five Michael. You opened up a lot of places to go for sure. Your writing is very engaging and captures the reader’s curiosity on what’s gonna happen next.

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Michael Serrur's avatar

Thanks, Howie! This is my first time writing something of this nature so I’m glad it has you hooked.

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Neil Goodman's avatar

Jack……the Ripper?!?!

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Chris Lipson's avatar

Really nice twist, Michael. This story is such fun! And again, your attention to detail is so good. 👏👏👏👏👏

You know, you’re among some of the greats with serialized writing— Hemingway, A Conan Doyle, Charles Dickens, Tolstoy, Jules Verne, Frank Herbert, ( yes, Dune), and H G Wells, to name a few. Some became movies— just sayin’.

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Michael Serrur's avatar

Never heard of them but I’ll take your word for it 😁 yeah it’s a fun way to write, gives you a little extra time to plot!

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The Daily Spark's avatar

I'm on the edge of my seat....

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